2nd
year of bachillerato
Selectividad
Exam. Text 1. ULTRA-THIN BARBIE: GIRLS POTENTIALLY IN DANGER.
Most
Common mistakes found
(How
could we learn a better way of doing things, if we never make
mistakes?)
MISTAKE
|
TYPE
|
CORRECTION
|
*The
parents
*The
young girls
*
The society
*The
physical appearance
|
(GR.)
-general
terms-
|
Parents
Girls
Society
Physical
appearance
|
*Same
that
|
Grammar
comparatives
|
Same
as
|
*Also
is a problem
|
Grammar:
sentence structure
(S+V+C)
|
It
is also a problem
|
|
Grammatical
category confusion
|
EXTREME
(noun)- EXTREMELY (adverb)
|
|
Vocabulary
suffixes
|
ADOLESCENT
(Noun, person)
ADOLESCENCE
(Abstract noun, stage)
|
*disorders
is
*Adolescents
has
|
GR.
((subject
and verb agreement))
|
Disorders
are
Adolescents
have
|
*This
disorders
|
GRAMMAR
(plural
+ plural)
|
These
disorders
|
*The
writer think
|
GR.
((subject
and verb agreement))
|
The
writer thinks
|
Offering
a piece of advice isn quite like giving orders!
|
Communication
/
Expression
|
You
should...
Maybe
you could...
If
I were you...
|
*In
my opinion, I think
|
Expression
|
You
are stating your opinion twice: that is redundant. You only need
to state it once per sentece.
Example:
In
my opinion,...
in
my view...
I
think that...
|
*That
people
|
Grammar
|
Those
people
The
word “people” is plural per se.
|
*a
problem of actually
|
Vocabulary
(false
friends)
|
Nowadays,
it is a problem.
|
*All
the world
|
Vocabulary
/ expression
|
Everybody
everyone
|
Incorrect
sentence structure
(missing
subject)
|
Sentence
structure / GRAMMAR
|
Correct
affirmative sentence structure in English:
S
+ V + O
|
Exercise
1.
some
of your compositions are too short.
|
|
Write
the number of words accordingly
|
Exercise
2.
most
of you just copy the words from the text literally.
|
|
So
as to justify your answer you should use your own words and
explanation besides some literal quotes.
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Some
of your texts, do not follow an organised pattern.
|
|
Remember
to follow this pattern:
1.
introduction
2.
body
3.
conclusion (do not add extra information in the conclusion)
|
Come
on! Cheer up! This was only your first Selectividad exam! You will
make it better soon! It is all about practice; the
more you practice, the better: better results, and it will tire you
less and less. I believe that we learn by practice and
remember: Tomorrow's
battle is won during today's practice.
Let's
get back to work!
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